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Posted: 18 September 2008 03:18 AM   [ Ignore ]
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http://www.flywit.com

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Posted: 19 September 2008 02:25 AM   [ Ignore ]   [ # 1 ]
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looks great but obviously you want actual criticism. my 2 suggestions are 1) use a higher line-spacing on the body text… this will make the whole page look slightly less cluttered 2) find a way to move the hot products higher up on the page… you want as many products (opportunities to make money) on the first part of the screen before people have to scroll down

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Posted: 23 September 2008 04:08 PM   [ Ignore ]   [ # 2 ]
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treydog00, thank you.

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