Honestly… interesting presentation. Yeah you could maybe clean up the text layout a little bit… but I could get a better handle on that if I could actually read it (since the English version wasn’t active).
Given design is an element of art… while you could make the colors pop a little more I couldn’t tell you that what you had chosen was wrong for any reason. The work in the portfolio was engaging as well.
You want a place people can come to find out about you and see some of your work… beyond that everything else will evolve as you evolve. You can’t be everybody else… just be you.